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Good attempt, could use a bit polish

Interesting take on this song!

In the beginning, It's a bit too slow my tastes which makes it a bit boring to listen to. Nice transition into the first faster part. Try to change that beginning flute (@0:36), really sounds out of place.

Toward the end, add a simple stand up base (@0:56), really too much high end spectrum stuff going on here. Neat ending, though you want triplets in the snare drum and that is not what is there, sounds VERY awkward (@1:21), try to get another sound too. Also, I'd like to hear the guitar have a more natural sounding solo, sounds too machine.

Overall, a good attempt, I gave you a 7/10 (4 in the ratings because its more of a 4 than 3). Polish this up a bit, simplify it a bit, and I think you'll have a winner.

Hope this helps, I try to offer helpful criticism!

SockpuppetRemix responds:

Woah, nice review! =D
I'll be redoing this song, so I'll keep all of that in mind.
Thanks a lot for all the help! =D

Really a fantastic work!

I actually use this song as my alarm on my cell phone, really nice job!

If I have any critique at all, it is that it is too short; DnB songs go into the 5 or 6 minute range sometimes. I'd really love to hear this piece extended, but, I guess quality win over quantity, and this has that FOR SURE!

Looking forward to hearing more from you!

Computer Engineering Student by day, musician by night. Love to compose and remix songs for friends and family. Check out my songs, leave some comments. Hope you enjoy them!

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