Good attempt, could use a bit polish
Interesting take on this song!
In the beginning, It's a bit too slow my tastes which makes it a bit boring to listen to. Nice transition into the first faster part. Try to change that beginning flute (@0:36), really sounds out of place.
Toward the end, add a simple stand up base (@0:56), really too much high end spectrum stuff going on here. Neat ending, though you want triplets in the snare drum and that is not what is there, sounds VERY awkward (@1:21), try to get another sound too. Also, I'd like to hear the guitar have a more natural sounding solo, sounds too machine.
Overall, a good attempt, I gave you a 7/10 (4 in the ratings because its more of a 4 than 3). Polish this up a bit, simplify it a bit, and I think you'll have a winner.
Hope this helps, I try to offer helpful criticism!
Woah, nice review! =D
I'll be redoing this song, so I'll keep all of that in mind.
Thanks a lot for all the help! =D
Really a fantastic work!
I actually use this song as my alarm on my cell phone, really nice job!
If I have any critique at all, it is that it is too short; DnB songs go into the 5 or 6 minute range sometimes. I'd really love to hear this piece extended, but, I guess quality win over quantity, and this has that FOR SURE!
Looking forward to hearing more from you!
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